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1. Washington state provided a subsidy of more than $2,000 for in-state students.

2. “The $13.5 million is the tip of a larger iceberg,” Jerry McCollum, coordinator of Arts and Culture Jerry said.

3. “We can’t live in a world with 14 percent tuition increases,” Floyd said.

4. The co-presidents announced a club to meet more people that are interested in hiking.

5. "There are still new things to say with art music," Williams said. “It’s hard to stop and listen, but when you do, it can be an extremely pleasant surprise.”

6. In September 2010, the wine-tasting endorsement will be available to stores, according to Jane Westman, culinary coordinator for Metropolitan Market.

7. He died from a heart attack in September 1996.

8. The club has its own audio engineer.

9. When it blasted off, the shock of the cannon added to the emotion of the game.


Shorten the following sentences.

1. Sleep becomes less of a priority for students.

2. A new workout routine is sweeping the country.